Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
About Deviant Official Beta Tester unenglishableUnited States Group :iconda-engineering: dA-Engineering
Be proud to be an Engineer!
Recent Activity
Deviant for 3 Years
6 Month Premium Membership
Statistics 135 Deviations 394 Comments 4,425 Pageviews

Critiques


:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found your style of writing endearing, as it is somewhat similar to my own. In this critique, I would like to highlight a few things I liked about your poem and also offer a few tips that may help you with future pieces (hopefully). On the theme, it took me a little delving to get into it proper...


:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found the images in this poem, though simple and possibly even commonplace, intense and refreshing. This is not a bad thing; in fact, it's even cooler that you were able to use ordinary images in an interesting way. You used a single color, gray, which my imagination responded to with a grayscal...

Official deviantART critiques I've done. These are mostly, if not completely, for poetry works; as poetry is one of the few subjects on which I have enough insight to critique.

deviantID

unenglishable
unenglishable
United States
Computer Engineering, Poetry, Music, Love, Life.
コンピュータ工学,詩、音楽、愛、命。

나는바보야
Interests
DA's new logo seems to be sparking some interest in the community...
:rabbithole:

In an effort to include my work on deviantart into the real world, I've updated my username.
Hopefully, this will not be too big of a problem.

よろしくね。

Comments


Add a Comment:
 
:iconblackbowfin:
BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello there and thank you for faving Poor Wooden Puppy.  It's much appreciated.  Have a good weekend!  :highfive:
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconourage:
ourage Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for adding my poem to your collection! And you're an engineer? That's impressive! I could never make it; I'm way too dumb Giggle 
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icon91816119:
91816119 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, my dear. :heart:
Reply
:iconsatoshiii:
SatoshiII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Long time no see, stranger.
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icondailybreadcafe:
DailyBreadCafe Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks for the fav :D
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icon91816119:
91816119 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, honey. :heart:
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconrepublic2033:
Republic2033 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
thanks for faving :happybounce: I really appreciate it !
Reply
(1 Reply)
:iconakai-karasu:
Akai-karasu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm pretty late, but still: thanks for collecting 'values! :)
Reply
(1 Reply)
Hidden by Owner
(1 Reply)
:icontales-of-tao:
Tales-of-Tao Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:, and the incredibly helpful critique. :iconarmstrongtighthugplz:
Reply
(1 Reply)
Add a Comment: