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:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found your style of writing endearing, as it is somewhat similar to my own. In this critique, I would like to highlight a few things I liked about your poem and also offer a few tips that may help you with future pieces (hopefully). On the theme, it took me a little delving to get into it proper...

:iconthewrittenrevolution: I found the images in this poem, though simple and possibly even commonplace, intense and refreshing. This is not a bad thing; in fact, it's even cooler that you were able to use ordinary images in an interesting way. You used a single color, gray, which my imagination responded to with a grayscal...

Official deviantART critiques I've done. These are mostly, if not completely, for poetry works; as poetry is one of the few subjects on which I have enough insight to critique.


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Computer Engineering, Poetry, Music, Love, Life.

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In an effort to include my work on deviantart into the real world, I've updated my username.
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Cocooue Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Student Photographer
Thanks for the fave :hug:
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galvezenrique95 Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks for collecting! :+fav:
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Carmalain7 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015
Hey mate, I've been seeing you around giving constructive and helpful comments all over the place and I just wanted to stop by to tell you that you're awesome and I know everyone in the lit community is honored to have you amongst us.

Thank you. :salute:
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello there and thank you for faving Poor Wooden Puppy.  It's much appreciated.  Have a good weekend!  :highfive:
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ourage Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for adding my poem to your collection! And you're an engineer? That's impressive! I could never make it; I'm way too dumb Giggle 
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91816119 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, my dear. :heart:
SatoshiII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Long time no see, stranger.
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DailyBreadCafe Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks for the fav :D
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91816119 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thank you so much, honey. :heart:
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